Ah, so that's what all those people look like.
Awesome job, I love how you made it a sepia-ish tone and colored the eyes. On
top of that, the eyes are really well done and sort of glow which gives it a
nice effect. Great work!
Great job, I like it without the outlines like that. I only would like to point
out that you should put your signature somewhere on there so no one rips your
work because you did a really good job here!
All that mosaic..! O_O Awesome amount of detail. And the composition is really
put together well. I especially like how you tied the iron-looking design from
the mosaic area onto the girl with brown hair's hair. Really an amazing
doujinshi! Keep up the good work.
You're a very talented artist! I took a look at your other pencil drawings and
I'm blown away. Your proportions are always spot on accurate and your shading is
fantastic. I love gray scale drawings because they challenge you to come up with
different ways to texturize your drawing, which again, you did so well (like the
elbow pad things for example). Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to
seeing your future submissions!
Nice work, especially the drawing of the couple themselves. Everything looks
proportionally accurate. You have a really good background and layout, but I
think the textures kind of take away from the wallpaper. The bricks look
realistic which doesn't match since you have a drawing as your focal. Same with
the ground and the grayish texture. Maybe try lowering the opacity or overlaying
them over a color layer. As for the bricks, maybe something simpler. There are
some good brick tutorials out there. Other than that, the light posts and the
fog do look very great though. I'm sorry to say so much stuff to work on, as you
said you are new with this type of piece. But I think with a few changes this
could be a very nice romantic wallpaper.
And 81 hours in 3 days? That would be like 2 hours of sleep total and nothing
but computer the rest of the time!
I knew this was your right when I saw the thumbnail (because of the cute green
haired girl, whose name I do not know ). Very cute wallpaper, it gives off such a cheerful vibe.
Interesting wallpaper. First, I have to ask, what in the world is that ponytail
coming out of the wall?
The way the characters are drawn kind of resemble Hayate the Combat Butler
drawing style (well in this wallpaper). Which is a plus for me. I
like the changes you made too. I like the wallpaper (the ponytail still freaks
me out though...). Overall, nice work!
Nice. I'm digging this wallpaper... The ferris wheel looks really good. There is
a little bit of color bleeding from the gun onto the girl's palm area though.
Just thought I'd point that out. Other than that, great work!
Nice work. I like it all, from the vector to the texture (except the part on her
shirt where it looks like pages put together, it seems a little distracting).
Other than that, sweet!
Nice vectoring. I like the effects you added, especially the reflection in the
girl's eye. The one thing that I notice though about the background is that you
can see stars on the planet to the left. There should be a black void there
since the planets are round and stars are much further away than planets. Other
than that, good job!
Quote: Okay, now I need an ugly
little chibi guy running off with some strings. BINGO, we use Crayon Shin-chan
and it's instant win, yes?
Lol, yes. Shin Chan is the freaking man....boy....ugly boy. I have to say
though, I feel bad for that guitarist, because I bet Shin's going to go floss
his butt with those guitar strings...or something involving his butt.
Getting back to the wallpaper, nice job on it. Music is life so I like your
motive behind making it. I like your color choice and of course, the textures
are splendid. Nice work!
I like the sharp background...after all it's anime, it doesn't have to be
photo-realistic. Speaking of the background...it's my favorite part of this
wallpaper. It's crisp and just gives that tranquil feel that you feel on a
winter day. Which is the best thing about winter days. Well then again..with how
close we are to the two girl's we probably would hear the girl on the right
breathing since you can see her breath.
Oo, nice! That was a nice scan to choose. You integrated Jigoku Shoujo into it
really well. I like the hair...and well everything else. BUT, I hope she is
nursing that butterfly in her mouth back to health, and not eating it!
Butterflies are friends, not food. Back
on topic...great work!
Nice work! The vectoring is great and I love the textures you used. She must be
tired after nagging Kyon all day
This just caught my eye..but there are some color bleeding areas. Like at the
bear's foot onto Haruhi, the purple ribbon onto the ground and on her right
foot, it's blue! It looks like the shading got covered with texture. As well as
on Haruhi's right hand, there are soft brown brush strokes from the bear's
shadow. Hope you don't mind me nit-picking...whenever I look at
people's work, I like to take it all in and look at every single
pixel...
Awesome CGing, great work.
Ah, so that's what all those people look like.
Awesome job, I love how you made it a sepia-ish tone and colored the eyes. On
top of that, the eyes are really well done and sort of glow which gives it a
nice effect. Great work!
This looks like someone's vector...It even has the person's signature at the top right.
http://www.planetrenders.net/renders/displayimage.php?pos=-21992
Great job, I like it without the outlines like that. I only would like to point out that you should put your signature somewhere on there so no one rips your work because you did a really good job here!
So cute! Shana looks so pretty. You did a great job vectoring the picture. I also like the pop-up book look you gave it. Great job.
You did a good job keeping your lines smooth. About the vector: I think the girl with pink hair is missing the white base part of her eyes.
LOL!
All that mosaic..! O_O Awesome amount of detail. And the composition is really put together well. I especially like how you tied the iron-looking design from the mosaic area onto the girl with brown hair's hair. Really an amazing doujinshi! Keep up the good work.
You're a very talented artist! I took a look at your other pencil drawings and I'm blown away. Your proportions are always spot on accurate and your shading is fantastic. I love gray scale drawings because they challenge you to come up with different ways to texturize your drawing, which again, you did so well (like the elbow pad things for example). Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to seeing your future submissions!
Nice work, especially the drawing of the couple themselves. Everything looks proportionally accurate. You have a really good background and layout, but I think the textures kind of take away from the wallpaper. The bricks look realistic which doesn't match since you have a drawing as your focal. Same with the ground and the grayish texture. Maybe try lowering the opacity or overlaying them over a color layer. As for the bricks, maybe something simpler. There are some good brick tutorials out there. Other than that, the light posts and the fog do look very great though. I'm sorry to say so much stuff to work on, as you said you are new with this type of piece. But I think with a few changes this could be a very nice romantic wallpaper.
And 81 hours in 3 days? That would be like 2 hours of sleep total and nothing but computer the rest of the time!
I knew this was your right when I saw the thumbnail (because of the cute green haired girl, whose name I do not know
). Very cute wallpaper, it gives off such a cheerful vibe.
Oh yeah, I deleted it.
Interesting wallpaper. First, I have to ask, what in the world is that ponytail coming out of the wall?
The way the characters are drawn kind of resemble Hayate the Combat Butler
drawing style (well in this wallpaper). Which is a plus for me.
I
like the changes you made too. I like the wallpaper (the ponytail still freaks
me out though...). Overall, nice work!
Nice. I'm digging this wallpaper... The ferris wheel looks really good. There is a little bit of color bleeding from the gun onto the girl's palm area though. Just thought I'd point that out. Other than that, great work!
Nice work. I like it all, from the vector to the texture (except the part on her shirt where it looks like pages put together, it seems a little distracting). Other than that, sweet!
Cute. I like it a lot. I like how you draw faces (has seen your other vector), they are very cute.
How do you do your lineart?
Nice work!
Adorable. I really like the painted look to the vector couple. And the background...amazing! This is one of my all time favorite wallpapers.
Wonderful painting. You did such a good job on everything. I like the amount of depth it has. Great work!
Nice vectoring. I like the effects you added, especially the reflection in the girl's eye. The one thing that I notice though about the background is that you can see stars on the planet to the left. There should be a black void there since the planets are round and stars are much further away than planets. Other than that, good job!
Lol, yes. Shin Chan is the freaking man....boy....ugly boy. I have to say though, I feel bad for that guitarist, because I bet Shin's going to go floss his butt with those guitar strings...or something involving his butt.
Getting back to the wallpaper, nice job on it. Music is life so I like your motive behind making it. I like your color choice and of course, the textures are splendid. Nice work!
I like the sharp background...after all it's anime, it doesn't have to be photo-realistic. Speaking of the background...it's my favorite part of this wallpaper.
It's crisp and just gives that tranquil feel that you feel on a
winter day. Which is the best thing about winter days. Well then again..with how
close we are to the two girl's we probably would hear the girl on the right
breathing since you can see her breath.
Nice! Reminds me of the brand "Icy Hot."
Oo, nice! That was a nice scan to choose. You integrated Jigoku Shoujo into it really well. I like the hair...and well everything else. BUT, I hope she is nursing that butterfly in her mouth back to health, and not eating it!
Butterflies are friends, not food.
Back
on topic...great work!
Nice work! The vectoring is great and I love the textures you used. She must be tired after nagging Kyon all day
This just caught my eye..but there are some color bleeding areas. Like at the
bear's foot onto Haruhi, the purple ribbon onto the ground and on her right
foot, it's blue! It looks like the shading got covered with texture. As well as
on Haruhi's right hand, there are soft brown brush strokes from the bear's
shadow.
Hope you don't mind me nit-picking...whenever I look at
people's work, I like to take it all in and look at every single
pixel...
Anyways...great work.